Here in the quiet of night
Surrounded by the soft light
I hear your words of love
Echoing through out
The chamber of my heart
As time begins to pull the memory of you
Further away
There are no words left to say
Anymore
About how you opened my heart
Only to shut the door
And if I live for tne thousand nights
Without you
The echoes will live on
Silently sensed beneath the bars of a song
That speaks to me of the soul in you
I thought I knew
Was full of tenderness
But was in time revealed to be
Only wilderness
Absolutely heartbreaking but I marvel at the love you own with this aching heart
Amazing, sweetie
πππ
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Thank you I think there is depth we reach with heartbreak. I don’t know if real love of this kind is for me in this world any more. β€
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No don’t say that. If I have learned anything it’s that life always surprises us just when we think we can’t take anymore of anything…warmth and love find us. You are wonderful. One of the rarest, empathetic people I’ve met. You deserve pure love and you will have it. Just never let go of hope.
Xxxx
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You know you are right about not giving up hope for I realised immediately after I wrote those words its possibly not true, just disappointment speaking. Thanks for your tender heart. β€
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Yes, exactly. I find myself doing the same thing. I’ll think or say something and immediately I’ll check myself. The universe listens, Deb. I know it has maybe become a clichΓ© but if you haven’t read the Secret, please do. Or perhaps watch the film, it is just as effective. This idea goes back centuries and was written by many many people before the lady …can’t think of her name…wrote the Secret. But I go back to it every so often. Soak it in. It works. It helps you refocus your pain onto achieving your dreams. I feel strongly you should read it or if it’s the case, re-read it.
Trust me
Xxx
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I have heard of it but I haven’t read it. I will most definitely check it out. No, I wont let this keep me stuck. I will move on after letting this go through me totally.
Hugs
And I do implicitly trust you.
Bless you for wisdom.
xoox
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Making me sigh!ππππ
All the hugs from me darling
X
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And in return. You softened my heart tonight. Thank you.
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I meant the love you ‘pen’. Although it kind of works the other way too ππ
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Lol π xox
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I hope those echos are not too reverberating…((Hugs))
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Its okay Ivor. I am accepting it. I know this is meant to be how I am feeling now. Its a very very deep sadness but its not going to consume me. I do have hope. Thanks for being there. Its such a comfort to read your comments I hope you had fun at the mall today. π
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I had a lovely day, and ended up going to the Geelong Sculptors Exhibition, that I wanted to see… I met up with exhibition’s curator, she was so kind to me, showed me around, and I told her I going to come for the writers part of the exhibition tomorrow, and that I’d picked out a piece of sculpture that I liked, and that was the one I was going to write about for the recital in the afternoon,….. as fate/karma would have it….. she blushed and smiled at me….. the piece I’d chosen…. that was actually her sculpture……. as if was meant to be…… And I’ve just finished writing the poem, ….. I’m more than pleased with the overall article……xx
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2019/10/18/mosquitoes-and-bees/
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Wow this makes me smile to read it Ivor How grand!!! Ive just logged on today so will check out you poem soon. So glad you had such a special day. love you lots xoxo
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Yes !! and I’m so looking forward to this afternoon, it’s sure to be a lot of fun for me…..xxx
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That’s wonderful. So lovely to have something like that to look forward to. xo
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For some reason the link to your poem says it cannot be found Ivor. Maybe you took it down?
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Oh, sometimes that happens when I reschedule the poem…. I’ll attach again here…
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2019/10/19/mosquitoes-and-bees/
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“Silently sensed beneath the bars of a song
That speaks to me of the soul in you
I thought I knew”
That line perfectly describes the wilderness you speak of. Just wow.
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Awww it touches me so much when these verses resonate. They just spring fully formed in my mind. Poetry ceaselessly amazes me, Marc. Hugs
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So strong and beautiful. Thank you for sharing it, Deb.
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