You showed me a place
Where I could live free of burdens
Because you surrendered yours
Long ago
When they became the yoke that threatend to strangle you
So I as I look back
I see the wisdom in your way
But it was one I was not ready for
To live that free
Would have meant not to be me
On the journey I was
So now
All these years hence
When I remember the sweet freedom of that place
We tasted
With music, food and fire and love
I forget too the times it was so unfamiliar
That I had to run back to the place of burdens
Which had been my life until then
More struggles were to come
So much burning ground to cross
And now when I remember how it felt to become ash
And then rained upon as I turned to sludge
I can only grieve the unformedness of that place
I was yet to know
The potters wheel and the kiln
In which I was fired and cracked
Until I could become a vessel
Capable of holding
My own life
Give it one. Nah. It doesn’t need a title.
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No title necessary. It’s lovely just as it is!
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Awww thanks so much….
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Thank YOU.
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You summarized it pretty well❤
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Thank you
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Beautiful piece of self reflection but those last few words – oh my, so beautiful. i love the metaphor of the kiln dried vessel that we become.
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It just came to me in a flow… as a gift and It worked thanks so much for that affirmation and confirmation.
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Those moments make for the best writing. You are kindly welcome! 🙂
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It’s what i live for and breathe for 🙂
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As we all do! Here’s wishing you thousands more of those moments 🙂
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❤ you too!
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❤
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wow, I can feel the depth in that one… I nominated you darling for the 3-day quote challenge.
Your amazing and I love reading your depth and journey.
https://kerri-elizabeth.com/2018/04/30/challenge/#.WudVx4jwa00
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Thanks so much I am not great at challenges simply becuase i have a lot of external pressures and responsibilities t the momemt but when I get time I will look into it. hugs and love ❤
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No worries hunni dont do ANYTHING thats adds more stress..big hugs..
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